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Merry shivrathri

28 Nov

Nikhil, a guy of 23, busy making his career was caught in the pangs of love. He met a female who was a staunch Christian and he being from a Brahmin community, it was a forbidden path for him to cross. But the letter R(eligion) had no role to play in their divine relationship. This strange relationship went on for six long years. Do you believe getting along with a girl for six years, when the validity of a so called true love these days doesn’t even exceed a quarter.

To commemorate that great day, Nikhil sprang a surprise on Sabrina. He met her on the 15th of September and took her for a long drive to recollect all that happened on the same day six years ago.

This was a very special drive for Sabrina as she yearned for it for a very long time but Nikhil could not make it materialize. And that day he went with a mindset not to say no to whatever Sabrina asked for. The highway was the road of her fantasy and when Nikhil hit the highway, Sabrina was lost for words. She felt joy gushing through every vein of hers. She could see her ardent desire was about to be fulfilled. Ecstasy was what she felt. She just said Thank You. Sabrina loved to drive along green fields and enjoy nature. Nikhil did just that. He drove down and spoke and expressed all that he felt. He was so excited to be seated beside her. There was joy, excitement and overwhelming passion which were expressed on his face. Sabrina just looked at him and enjoyed every reaction of his excitement. She felt like doing so many simple acts which would give him the joy of being with her and he tried to do all that she would like him to do. Thus, they went on doing these things pleasing each other and at the same time rejoicing because the other felt happy.

Suddenly, Sabrina asked Nikhil to stop and buy a cup of tea and something to eat. He did it with no hesitation and relished the idea that he was able to get her something to eat. They had the tea together after raising a toast to their cherished relationship and she began to feed Nikhil as he drove on. Nikhil did not want this drive to end, so he drove down a deserted country road in the midst of green fields. He reached out to kiss her as he could no longer suppress his pent up feelings. Their lips brushed against each other and pangs of love rushed from within their bowels and into their veins. Memories clouded their minds and they were reminded of their first kiss. In a few seconds, they could feel each other so warm and they wanted more of each other but they were on the road. The drive went on. Nikhil held her hand and caressed his beard. She could not withhold it any longer. She felt everything within her cry out for more of him. Nikhil looked into her eyes and relished the passionate look she expressed. He understood it all, but could satisfy her only with a touch and kiss. They recollected the day they met, the place and the sequence of events. They laughed together and thanked god for this gracious hand that had kept them together for these six long years. They realized the value of their relationship, the worth of each other and the grace of god.

While sharing such moments and thoughts, time was drawing near for them to part. Their drive was coming to an end. Sabrina asked Nikhil to stop and buy flowers. She gave him the opportunity to experience the joy of placing flowers on her head. She enjoyed that moment and he experienced that joy. On their way back, they crossed a church and suddenly Nikhil asked if she wanted to go for a visit to the church. Sabrina just could not believe that another desire of hers was about to be fulfilled. They reversed the car and entered the church. It was like a man and wife walking up to the altar. Sabrina knelt down and prayed. She once again thanked god for bringing Nikhil into her life and for all the joys and sorrows they shared together. She specially thanked god for that wonderful day which she believed was god given. There was radiance on her face when she came out and Nikhil understood the day was complete and he could satisfy Sabrina to the utmost.

They drove on and now they finally reached the spot where they had to part. Sabrina shook hands with Nikhil and wished she would never have to leave it. Nikhil felt he could go on holding her hand. They bid good bye and went in different directions just to come back and discuss about the day, the day they wished to remember, the day that went into their annals, a day that would never be forgotten, A day given to them by god, the most unforgettable day of their lives. It was definitely a day to remember.

“Hey Nick, she slept off even before you started the story. How many more times would you tell her the same story just because it’s our own. NO NO NO DON’T WAKE HER UP………………………”

“Amma what ma!!!!!!!!!!!!”

“Merry Shivrathri baby.”

Nikhil, a guy of 23…………………………………………………

 

Idhuvum Kadandhupogum

Maya

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Magical Thoughts, Haunt my mind. Irresistible ideas, Fill my heart. How do I vent? Pondering upon this, Looking up the sky, I seek out a way. I can hold it no more, But to tell you All I Feel. Life is all to express, Hello, I am here at Word-press. Feel and comment at your leisure, There is a promise all for sure, You will never leave disappointed, Lets fly the skies high unwarranted.
15 Comments

Posted by on November 28, 2010 in Relationships

 

15 Responses to Merry shivrathri

  1. Nocturnal Bird

    November 29, 2010 at 10:04 am

    Maya,

    It was a mix of Kadhalukku Mariyadhai and Panchathanthiram… Nice flow of words, but lost you half-way thru and anyway managed to catchup with you for the climax.. U went into the details of the drive in a much vivid manner which just was too much i felt… I came here
    expecting a Merry Shivarathri and u gave me a Halloween Nalvazhtukkal…

    Keep Writing…

     
  2. Venkat Sudarsan

    November 29, 2010 at 5:49 pm

    Nice one. But you are not up to your usual standard!!! Expecting better ones.

     
  3. sanjeev

    November 29, 2010 at 6:00 pm

    a great and a crisp story with vivid details. can include some humor as well … KEEP POSTING

     
  4. Manu

    November 29, 2010 at 8:41 pm

    good work….btw liked the ending of the story…..totally unexpected…

     
  5. virajith

    November 29, 2010 at 8:45 pm

    really a good one.The feel was there in it but u could hav added ups and downs!!!

     
  6. Pradeep

    November 29, 2010 at 8:49 pm

    Not sure why but I kind of expected an ending like this…unexpected surprising endings need not become a signature of your blogs is my opinion…but your writing style is superb…enjoy reading reading every blog..keep blogging

     
  7. karthik

    November 29, 2010 at 10:12 pm

    hey maya…
    nice story i enjoyed ya starting, it touched my heart but ending it was like baloon…
    keep writing make all of us feel hard…

     
  8. santhosh jayakaran

    November 30, 2010 at 12:22 am

    haha!.. enjoyable!.. and that’s what matters!.. good luck!

     
  9. radha

    November 30, 2010 at 1:19 am

    hiii…
    you are a great story teller. i expected a different end at different points of time. none of it was right. good twist. expecting the next one to be even better.

     
  10. Mithun Mohandas

    November 30, 2010 at 6:49 am

    Welcome back da! I really enjoyed reading the story… Good job.

     
  11. vandhana

    November 30, 2010 at 11:09 am

    fantastic work kartik :) Thank god you didnt end the story in a tragic way :D loved each and every bit of it :) Feels awesome :) Keep it up :)

     
  12. Charan

    November 30, 2010 at 2:43 pm

    It was nice however I felt it was like showing the same trick on different car. Experiment a lot more man…!!!

    Cheers,
    Charan

     
  13. kishan

    November 30, 2010 at 5:16 pm

    nice 1 mate!!!!!!!

     
  14. sathish

    November 30, 2010 at 7:41 pm

    good work karthick. GBU

     
  15. Shiva

    December 5, 2010 at 4:59 pm

    A descent attempt.

    Shiva

     

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