Jai and Veeru were born together. Science gave them some name, Mr.sippy gave them some name and why not, even Gabbar gave them some name. But, I simply called them The Twins.
They were identical, conjoint and resembled their band of brothers. They looked the same, did the same and lived the same.
Most of them wished for their unity and few took vows to separate them.
They were an epitome of brotherhood. They lived with and travelled with each other, yet none among both interfered with each other’s life.
They believed in service to mankind and did that very responsibly. They served people with all their might with a few hours of rest in the night.
They definitely had the power in them to ignite the life of their colleagues and helped them show the right way.
Many felt their service to mankind to be their strength but SOME felt the same to be their weakness.
When such small SOME killed THE TWINS in the name of jihad, the papers read
“Western Railway lines blown by LeT”.
Idhuvum Kadandhupogum
Maya
Nocturnal Bird
March 2, 2011 at 11:51 am
Good one. Got to improve on your presentation skills and the flow of thoughts.
Priyanka
March 2, 2011 at 12:43 pm
short and sweet..
Aditya
March 7, 2011 at 8:34 am
The climax didn’t impress me much… But the lead to the climax was very interesting.
Shiva
March 8, 2011 at 8:23 am
Man, you were just getting me into the groove and suddenly , the pot is broken, could have extended and spiced a bit more da.
The idea fabulous, execution hapless, result hmmm. Hopeless.
That was my version of alliteration, though Guru may not agree.
Good Luck
Shiva