Better late than never

I have known Meenakshi from the time I stopped using nappies. The friendship which prevailed between our parents was the reason for our homes to be in the same apartment. We were inseparable like the Siamese twins and were as close to an extent that we never missed the other one’s company. She was part and parcel of my life and there was no childhood memory where she wasn’t a part of.

We were fortunate to be in the same class from Kindergarten till the secondary stage. We went to school together, played together, fought together and most of the times our thoughts coincided too. Togetherness seemed to be a word found just to describe how we were. We also went to the extent of asking an extra gift for the other person when someone gifted us something in singular.

Let it be a dream, let it be a reality, I have had my life completely with a girl whom I fondly called “Meenu”.
Every story has a turning point and my life also had one.

This happened when Meenu joined another school for pursuing a different stream of studies and I was completely left alone. I had never been without her and every time I looked around to share something, she wasn’t there. I used to wait for the bell to run back home so that I could spend some time with her and to my disappointment, she used to be late every day. I made it a point to spend the few minutes which we used to get in the night to share what we had to. The life without her by my side became tougher as days progressed.

One fine day, I saw her with a guy who she introduced to be her friend from the new school and I couldn’t bear the feeling of her with someone else. I realized that day, that it was difficult to imagine a life without her and assured myself that I had fallen in love with her.

Time passed like a whirlwind and we had enjoyed the time which we got every day, during those years in which we were engaged in graduating ourselves.

Everything ran so fast and my love for Meenu was known to none except me. I had refrained from expressing my love for years and I felt I might even lose her if I delayed further. I decided to express my love on her 24th birthday. Her first birthday wish had always been from my side and this time, some other guy had already wished her before I could. This was one of the dreadful moments of life and before I could say a word after wishing her, she told me to come home the next day, as she held some surprise for me.

I was early to her house the next day and was talking to her parents with a smile on my face concealing the tension I had. She came down like an angel, got us all together in the dining table and said that she was in love with a guy named Fabien Pinto. I was shocked and her parents hugged on to her in agreement despite her lover being an Anglo Indian. I had a smile on my face and my heart was pushing me to tell her that I loved her. I controlled my emotions and the inner pressure of expressing my love to her.

A few days Later…

A role of a family friend was too tough to play during the days leading to the engagement helping them with the arrangements. It required a lot of heart to do such a thing with a smile on your face. I did it for my love, for our parents and to say the least I did it for “Meenu”. She even forced me to design a dress for the function and Meenu was moving all along the lawn in the costume which I had designed enjoying the engagement with no traces of regret.

Still, I was amazed that she never understood that I loved her so much and for so long. It was disappointing and I felt I was too late in expressing myself. When she could understand every movement of mine, why couldn’t she understand the love I had for her????? Life went with a lot of questions in mind.
A few days after engagement, she came home with a wedding card and wanted me to accompany her in inviting all our friends for the wedding at the Cathedral, the following month. She forced me to be by her side while she did all the shopping for the marriage and I was constantly telling myself that I did it for the love I had, I have and will have.
Fabien Weds Meenakshi

(The day of reckoning)

It was the first time I visited a Cathedral and I had to do it for Meenakshi. I saw her dressed in a white bridal costume and getting ready for the prayers before the wedding. I was just looking at the clock for all the customary rituals to get over and that’s when the Priest announced to the gathering that Meenakshi and Fabien would exchange their rings.

I couldn’t wait anymore and I just did what my heart said. I went close to Meenu, brushed my lips against hers and said “It would be unfair on my part to conceal my love anymore. I love you Meenu”.

She gave me a tight hug and replied “Me too Fabien.”

Idhuvum Kadandhupogum
Maya

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55 thoughts on “Better late than never

  1. hey de story line is awesome n de way u hav portrayed is too gud.. wit de deepest of emotions i can connect de story as mine . rather can feel de emotions involved.. gud job… keep writin.. al de best

  2. Great post. The plot is filmy but i like ur presentation. lengthy, detailed yet driving the point home. Nice to see such refreshingly original posts from fellow bloggers. Will recommend it to my friends!!

    • hey man i just wanted the people to think about the suspense which is revealed at the end da. Some who dont get the feel of it do get what really happened da.

  3. Nice story, Very very Filmy, Had expected some more maturity and more emotions…. esp after your previous 2 stories.

    Keep writing. We are so proud of you

  4. Great feel throughout the article da..!!!

    U have portrayed things beautifully.. and love is in the air..!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂

    As usual u have ended it in ur signature style.. i was expecting it…

    “”””And.. u cud have gone for a different and an unknown name for the girl.. that was the only thing which didnt go down well with me.. otherwise it was extremely good..!! “””

    The lines in the quotes are strcitly IMO( In my opinion)

    Otherwise.. wonderful attempt.. i hope u write these type of articles.. which go right into the readers heart..!!

    ALL THE BEST..!!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂

    ROCK ON..!! 🙂 🙂 🙂

  5. For a lazy blog reader, this post might come as perky one with a crisp detail. It is to the point yet descriptive. Good going! 🙂

  6. The crux has been taken from Piriyada Varam Vendum.
    Narration also looks the same.

    But u proved your class with your Climax…

    IT WAS REALLY A GREAT END.
    sAMMA YA MUDICHIRRUKA DA.

    KEEP IT UP.

  7. Never delay in expressing Love da,,,, I have missed out just 15 loves by delaying ….

    Good one for a dramatic story
    I will not go on suggesting things that might make not you, but the readers cry….

    Keep Rocking,
    Ultimate Underdog

  8. The end was excellent. This story is like one big sms!!! Everything was perfect.
    Great blogging! Keep coming to entertain us!!!!

  9. For a second I thought it was something similar to a Tamil cinema. But the way it twisted in the end, I was thrilled. Excellent article and good narration. “A twist in a tale” is always entertaining. Good thinking. The article might seem simple to readers, but thinking of the way you brought this up, the creativity should really be admired. Although I have read similar kind of “twist in the tale” books, this one is also very pleasing. Try different subjects at will and entertain readers as ever.

  10. Dear Karthik,

    Love the ending. Very well done. Like the previous post said, Signature close to your story.
    Nevertheless, feelings and emotions displayed beautifully.
    Loved it!!!!!!! And “fabien” loved it too!

  11. hmmm….nice attempt..i had read this kind of stry b4….bt i definitely felt the essence of ur writing…again vry refreshing subject too..keep it up..

  12. dai its really nice da..great narration man…u believe it or not,i guessed the ending while reading the second para itself…but still its nice…
    storiyum naisu meenuvum naisu…..

    nice work…keep it up…

  13. Hey i love it! Your explanations are very descriptive and it’s really easy to visualize! 🙂 And the ending was very different, but it adds more value to the storyline! 🙂 good job!

  14. To be honest, it was a very predictive plot but the style with which you portrayed the characters and narrated the whole stuff is really commendable. Emotions were spectacularly utilised throught out the story..

    thumbs up buddy!!

    do visit my place and see if you can find sth of importance…

  15. Ending is different from usual story- I think soe time the saying “‘Stitch in time saves nine”” is more applicable than “”better to be late than never??????””

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